Friday, August 21, 2009

Confusions

When my heart cannot speak
For what it does not know
My eyes try to cry
For the pain it cannot feel
My slow breath cannot sigh
For what it doesn't miss
Although I cannot tell you why
This isn't happiness
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    You really should write a second part for this, you paint a really good picture but it seems to hang in the end.

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  2. UnknownOctober 2, 2009 at 7:22 PM

    I know, but that is the point, its supposed to hang, you are supposed to feel that sense of it hasn't ended

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